It is finally night! I hope I find some yummy seeds. My big ears sense no danger or large animals coming to gobble me up. Also my big eyes see no trouble either. Wait a second…oh no, a fennec fox! I hope it doesn’t come eat me! It’s actually going to away!
Hmm, what is that smell? It smells like seeds. I have to start going that way quick. Yummy! I must have been really starved to eat all those seeds in a very little bit of time. But I am still hungry. Oh no! It is getting light out and warm out! I have to get to my burrow home. Just a little more and I’ll be home. I am starting to get really warm.
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Dayna you did a fantastic job on that part of the story. It was good and interesting. I wanted to keep reading it until it ends. GOOD JOB!
dayna i like the beging of the story.It was finally night.I hope to find some yummy seeds!! lol!
Dayna I LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do more I like it!
Dayna,your story is CCCCOOOOOLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!
Dayna your story was fantastic I loved it I mostely liked the part when you smelled seeds good scene of smell I think you really put effort into your writing.
sweet that was a good story
Your story is amazing!
Dayna, I am very impressed by your word choice throughout the story. You did not just tell us a story, instead you make your readers feel like they are actually in the story...great writing!! :)
Lerboa I love ur story!!! lol
I like your story.
danya you stoy is very very athosactic you didi a great job! it should be a childerns book!!!!!!
what is your favrite part in the hole thing?mine was the part when you said wait a second oh no it a fox i love the actshion
from arianna
Dayna I thought your story was great it felt like that you were really the Lerboa yourself I have to say.
dayna i like your story. It whus
cool.
I like you wright lol
lol
Dayna I ah-dorded your story but no one in the class can spell!!! Honest to god!!!!!!!
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